I lost it...
Right when Kenstar sneezed about using his special technique.
T...That was birlliant!!
I am absolutely stunned! What a world you've created. A mechanical paradise. With two characters with even personalities, even for the little time that I've known them. If you could, could you tell me how to made this flash? Frame by frame on paper? Computer? What'd you do?
(I'm an aspiring animator in Uni. right now. So, I really wish to know!)
The music was very fast paced and that kept me on edge. Perfect choice!
I also love the angles and actions you gave to the characters. Really awesome!
i would have liked to do this on paper first but realistically i didn't have the time or the resources - it was made from start to finish in flash. glad you enjoyed the cartoon, thanks for the comments. you will see more of them in the future
I really enjoy this pop art type look. Very very cute and simplistic!
But could very well have had more time put into the line art first, as she looks incredibly out proportion. Her torso's actually a bit too long in length, and she is no where near the right width. Making her have a twig appearance. Like she could snap over at any time. Also, her legs look waaaaay too short...
Her head is also quite large and in comparison to her torso, it should not be that big.
I also actually do not like the overall pose... There's not excitement to it. Nothing that says anything about her personality, or who she is, other than putting up her hand and pushing down her skirt. She doesn't have a charismatic or even just a simple appealing pose to her. She has quite an awkward pose, and expression, making her look very plain and generic.
The coloring's nice though. I do like that.
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